Friday, 18 November 2016
Chris Lost in the Ranges
This story is about a boy how almost lost his dad as that were walking throw a tamed forest he was so lucky that there was two men that was walking throw the bush walk,i liked this story because its a happy ending it was sad when his dad fell.
Friday, 4 November 2016
Wednesday, 2 November 2016
Tuesday, 1 November 2016
Writing Sample
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“Two days before the ambush, “it was 12 o'clock at midnight it was so silent all my men were sleeping then I went to check up on my watch team but they were not to be seen then I witnessed two legs sitting right there then I went to check it out but its seems that my watch team were in each bush around the campsite, so I got ready for whatever that was to come I knew that there was just one person because he was just sitting in a bush on the far end of the campsite, I knew because I had a heat signature coming from the far end of the campsite the I saw him right there and I sniped him with a sniper with silencer and checked on the UAV for any sign of enemy contact around the area all night until morning”.
“Once it was 6 o'clock I woke up my men up by shooting a my pistol bullet in the air to test their reflexes, every one of my men woke up,and I said get up our watch team is dead then we packed up and ran to the nearby trench, but one of my best men Jake stayed back I said what are you doing, he said “ i'm “ them a big boom happened blowing up my friend Jake he had brown thick hair like a lion's mane, he was a medium built solder that had fought for united states for five years then his time came I had to look for his tag I found it and held onto it till we get back to united states to give it to his wife and kids, then we set up camp at the trench and stayed the night until morning.
“The next morning we head of to the extraction point we had cover to survive but only five of us can fit on the helicopter so me and ghost stayed back and fought until the next helicopter came”,”get on this chopper me and ghost will cover you”brain their too much” just take the rocket launchers and I will cover you”OK sarge,dame there’s some melee tourist keep them away from me”OK”all the rocket launchers are out”know just shoot the oncoming enemies and ill take out the far side enemies”OK sarge” me and ghost got shot on our shoulders and waited for the helicopter to come, it came it saved me but ghost bled to death I grabbed his tag and his body and took him to a cemetery and made him a funeral and gave his tag to his kid’s, and said my fear well and left to go and give Jake's tag to his kids, then I retired and lived my normal life until I met you soup is it”yes thank you for telling us your story of ghost, Jake and you” don't worry kid.
Thursday, 27 October 2016
Chris Writing test practice
“Two days before the ambush, “it was 12 o'clock at midnight it was so silent all my men were sleeping then I went to check up on my watch team but they were not to be seen then I witnessed two legs sitting right there then I went to check it out but its seems that my watch team were in each bush around the campsite, so I got ready for whatever that was to come I knew that there was just one person because he was just sitting in a bush on the far end of the campsite, I knew because I had a heat signature coming from the far end of the campsite the I saw him right there and I sniped him with a sniper with silencer and checked on the UAV for any sign of enemy contact around the area all night until morning”.
“Once it was 6 o'clock I woke up my men up by shooting a my pistol bullet in the air to test their reflexes, every one of my men woke up,and I said get up our watch team is dead then we packed up and ran to the nearby trench, but one of my best men jake stayed back I said what are you doing, he said “ i'm “ them a big boom happened blowing up my friend jake he had brown thick hair like a lion's mane, he was a medium built solder that had fought for united states for five years then his time came I had to look for his tag I found it and held onto it till we get back to united states to give it to his wife and kids, then we set up camp at the trench and stayed the night until morning.
“The next morning we head of to the extraction point we had cover to survive but only five of us can fit on the helicopter so me and ghost stayed back and fought until the next helicopter came”,”get on this chopper me and ghost will cover you”brian their too much” just take the rocket launchers and I will cover you”ok sarge,dame there’s some mele tourist keep them away from me”ok”all the rocket launchers are out”know just shoot the oncoming enemies and ill take out the far side enemies”ok sarge” me and ghost got shot on our shoulders and waited for the helicopter to come, it came it saved me but ghost bleeded to death I grabbed his tag and his body and took him to a cemetery and made him a funeral and gave his tag to his kid’s, and seid my fear well and left to go and give jakes tag to his kids, then I retired and lived my normal life until I met you soup is it”yes thank you for telling us your story of ghost, jake and you” don't worry kid.
Wednesday, 21 September 2016
Tuesday, 20 September 2016
Thursday, 15 September 2016
Wednesday, 14 September 2016
Wednesday, 31 August 2016
Tuesday, 9 August 2016
Monday, 4 July 2016
Wednesday, 13 April 2016
Thursday, 24 March 2016
Friday, 4 March 2016
memorial service of Priscilla Tui
Today's assembly was not a normal assembly it was a memorial service of Priscilla Tui Priscilla was like a hero to us all because she loved making sandwich's for kids that had no lunch, and always supported our school she always had a kind heart we will always remember her. Then we ended up singing our waiatar then watched their wading it was so sad for the Tui family god bless the Tui family and Priscilla.
Monday, 29 February 2016
Friday, 26 February 2016
Chris Writing Narrative 3
The death road
on a sunny day, two men wanted to go for a walk but they didn't know where to go then they decided to go thro the forest,their names were Crosby and Jason they really wanted to be fit for rugby so they set off to the forest for a hike but it was getting dark it was like going through a haunted forest then well the sun was setting,they ran through the forest like mice then they sore
a man with no face and it had a note to not go throw or you will die.So the two men was not skered of the forest because they are men, of they went
into the dark part of the forest and saw another not saying “is your last warning or you will end up like them”.
But the men just didn't care about the letters and set of into the darkest part of the forest but it was so lucky they had flash lights and found the last note it said “you are dead know it tried to worn you know you're going to die” in blood, then they heard a sown it was like a chainsaw so they went closer to the chain saw noise and they saw a man with a mask with another man's face, matter of fact there were lots of stitches of other people's faces.
He had a chain saw so Crosby and Jason ran for their lives and made it and the sun was still up and the man was still chasing them but then they lost him and they said to the policeman that their is a man with a chainsaw chasing them then the policeman said to go home i'll find him and take him to justice then Crosby and Jason ran home but that man's mask is still in the heads and they took a picture of him and showed him to the policeman and went home. The man is in this picture
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Chris Writing a Narrative 2
the sinister forest
One day there were two ghost hunters, their names were Jason and Crosby. Crosby had a american accent and Jason had a Mexican accent, They were the best ghost hunters in the world however they didn't know what kind of spirit was in the forest, it scared every single person that walked in the forest. Jason and Crosby set off to the haunted forest while there were in the forest, a voice was whispering to go back home or die.
so Crosby and Jason saw that the sun was disappearing. So they grabbed out their flash lights and set of to find the spirit then they found it and it was singing a scary song but they didn't know it was a little girl that got murdered in the forest. It was so hard to get her because.
Monday, 22 February 2016
Friday, 12 February 2016
Chris Writing a Narrative
five nights at Freddy roller coaster.
One day there was a roller coaster it was called the five nights at Freddy roller coaster it was so scary, everybody loved it, so two men there names are Crosby and Jason really wanted to go by saving up there money for tickets but they didn't know that it was no ordinary roller coaster there is three animaltronics and they were dangerous.
Then there friend Moroni really wanted to go then Jason and Crosby invited him to come then if you survive. The three animaltronics names were Chica Bonnie and Freddy the prize if you survive your prize is to make it out and the animaltronics will sleep, for thirty seconds when the thirty seconds up the animaltronics is going to chase you but Moroni tripped up and the animaltronic. Bonnie caught him and turned him into animaltronic
he was a fox but he was fast and the fox had a hole so Crosby and Jason knew that the fox was runing to turn them into a anameltronic so they ran as fast as they could. They were almost at the exit and the fox animaltronic was right behind them, then rite on time thay made it to the exit. And never went back.
One day there was a roller coaster it was called the five nights at Freddy roller coaster it was so scary, everybody loved it, so two men there names are Crosby and Jason really wanted to go by saving up there money for tickets but they didn't know that it was no ordinary roller coaster there is three animaltronics and they were dangerous.
Then there friend Moroni really wanted to go then Jason and Crosby invited him to come then if you survive. The three animaltronics names were Chica Bonnie and Freddy the prize if you survive your prize is to make it out and the animaltronics will sleep, for thirty seconds when the thirty seconds up the animaltronics is going to chase you but Moroni tripped up and the animaltronic. Bonnie caught him and turned him into animaltronic
he was a fox but he was fast and the fox had a hole so Crosby and Jason knew that the fox was runing to turn them into a anameltronic so they ran as fast as they could. They were almost at the exit and the fox animaltronic was right behind them, then rite on time thay made it to the exit. And never went back.
Chris Letter to teacher
Dear Mrs Berry
During the holidays me and my family when to the beach and had a BBQ it was so fun. Me and my cousin swam in the water it was so cold!! that i had frost bites, but it was nice because the weather was so hot the cold water made me feel like it was not hot at all my little cousin loves water ones she go's dives in the water she never wants to go out.
Then when we were finished swimming me and my older cousin packed up all of the beach gear, then we packed the BBQ gear then when and took my cousin and my auntie home after we had ice cream. Then me and my mum and dad went home and got clean and when to the movies and watched IP Man three it was so cool because it had lots of karate.
Then we went home and went to sleep. The next day it was my birthday!! then I got ready to go to a restaurant in mission bay. The food was so nice my whole family liked the oysters and the muscle’s also I liked the seafood fettuccine it was so delicious then for a while we had dessert it was my birthday cake with strawberry ice cream it was so delicious then once we were finished we drove home.
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