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Chris Mashed Potato Sculpting - Punctuation and Paragraphs

Mashed Potato Sculpting - Punctuation

WALT:  use a range of punctuation, including full stops, capital letters, commas, exclamation marks, question marks, speech marks and apostrophes.

WALT: separate ideas to create new paragraphs that focus on one main point.

Read the paragraph in box one, then in box two add in the right punctuation and paragraphs.

Full stops: 10 capital letters: 14 commas: 4 exclamation marks: 0 question marks: 0 speech marks: 0 apostrophes: 0 paragraphs: 3

Unedited mashed potato sculpting originated in Auckland new Zealand in 2014 it was invented by a great teacher named miss garden the aim of the game is to sculpt an amazing piece of art using mashed potatoes the equipment you will need is a plate of freshly mashed potatoes and a flat surface to work on mashed potato sculpting is held indoors this is because the mashed potato needs to be in room temperature perfect for sculpting this is an individual event there are five competitors competing at one time each player has two minutes to sculpt a master piece from mashed potatoes competitors must only use the the mashed potato on their own plate players who touch or steal potato from other competitors are immediately disqualified

Edited Mashed potato sculpting originated in Auckland New Zealand in 2014. It was invented by a great teacher named Miss Garden. The aim of the game is to sculpt an amazing piece of art using mashed potatoes.  The equipment you will need is a plate of freshly mashed potatoes, and a flat surface to work on. Mashed potatoes sculpting is held indoors. This is because the mashed potatoes, needs to be in room temperature perfect for sculpting. This is an individual event, there are five competitors competing at one time. Each player has two minutes to sculpt a master piece from mashed potatoes. Competitors must only use the mashed potatoes on their own plate. Players who touch or steal potatoes from other competitors, are immediately disqualified.

Omari's and chris Explaining My Event

Explaining My Event

Name of event and background information:	My Event is called Hot Dog Eating Contest.And it is getting held in New Zealand in front of two mountains.It was evented by the Amazing Omari Warana.and chris rima
Aim of the game:	The group who eats all the hot dogs on the plate before the other teams  wins the trophy.There's going to be a first second and third place in my hot dog eating contest.
Equiptment:	For equipment you need a plate,hot dogs,table and a chair.
Venue:	It will be held behind one tree hill and a random mountain.
Players/positions:	There is going to be 10 players and 6 groups all fighting for the gold silver and bronze trophy crown and medal.
Rules:	You have to eat all the hot dogs on the plate first before the other teams/groups.

Chris's Bowl Of Rice

A Bowl Of Rice 1.1.09

1. Find  on a map. Colour and label it. Take a photo to put on this doc to show where it is.

2. What tells you it is time to harvest the rice? it turns  brown  summer

3. What is a ‘threshing machine’? (what does it do?) it it deze tacks  brown stuff of the  rice

4. What goes into a threshing machine? these  

What 2 things come out separately?

5. What do the family use each of these things for: rice stalks -

Chris Rima. Three Little Pigs- Punctuation

Three Little Pigs- Punctuation

WALT: understand and use a range of punctuation, including full stops, capital letters, commas, exclamation marks, question marks and speech marks.

Read the paragraph in box one, then in box two add in the right punctuation.

Hints: Full stops: 6  capital letters: 7  commas: 6 exclamation marks: 0 question marks: 0 speech marks: 8

Unedited There was once a family of pigs. the Mother pig was very poor one day she sent her three little pigs out to find some gold. the first that went off met a man with a bundle of straw and said to him. Please man give me that straw to build me a house  the man did and the little pig built a house with it. Suddenly there came along a wolf and knocked at the door and said little pig little pig let me come in the pig answered "no no by the hair of my chin chin chin" the wolf then answered to that then ill huff "and ill puff and ill blow your house in".

Edited There was once a family of pigs. The mother pig was very poor, one day she sent her three little pigs out to find some gold. The first that went off met a man with a bundle of straw, and said to him "Please man give me that straw to build me a house"  the man did, and the little pig built a house with it. Suddenly there came along a wolf and knocked at the door and said"little pig, little pig let me come in" the pig answered, "No! No! by the hair of my chin chin chin" the wolf then answered to that, "Then i'll huff and i'll puff and i'll blow your house in"

Early finishers: Take a screenshot of both paragraphs, then post to your blog with a few sentences explaining your learning.

Game: Alien Punctuation game

Chris of Commonwealth Games Punctuation

Punctuating a paragraph

"Go"! Yelled dad. He was yelling at the Tv, While he was watching boxing during the Commonwealth Games. Dad was watching very intensely, David Nyika looked strong. BOOM! His opponent was knocked to the ground. "Hooray" we all shouted, David won gold and he is a Champion. Wow! I want to be a Boxer when I grow up and be a Champion.

 

By Chris Rima

Chris of Commonwealth Games - Punctuation

Commonwealth Games - Punctuation

WALT: understand and use a range of punctuation, including full stops, capital letters, commas, exclamation marks, question marks and speech marks.

Read the paragraph in box one, then in box two add in the right punctuation.

Hints: Full stops: 3 capital letters: 7 commas: 4 exclamation marks: 0 question marks: 0 speech marks: 0

Unedited The commonwealth is a family of 53 countries. Spread over every continent and ocean in the world although the people of the commonwealth are different in many ways. they work together by sharing ideas and experiences skills and knowledge this year it will be held in Glasgow Scotland. New Zealand Samoa England and Canada Australia. weight lifting

Edited The commonwealth is a family of 53 countries, spread over every continent and ocean. in the world although the people of the commonwealth are different in many ways they work together by sharing ideas and experiences skills and knowledge this year it will be held in Glasgow Scotland

Early finishers: Take a screenshot of both paragraphs, then post to your blog with a few sentences explaining your learning.

Game: Alien Punctuation game

Omari's and chris's Game On Alphabet Key