Writing Reflection & Goal Setting
WALT: assess our writing using a rubric
WALT: create a goal for the next time we write
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Topic: ANZAC
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blogs audience.
Purpose: To be able to assess our writing and create a goal accordingly
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Our Reflection Writing Frame:
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Write about two things you did well. You could start with a sentence like:
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The first thing i did is to put a capitals on each paragraph and a full stop at each ends of paragraphs
and i put some comer in some species.
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Write about two things that you could improve on. You could start with a sentence like:
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I could improve with my puncheralady and try to succeed more well i grow up
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Create your goal below. You will need to state your goal and explain why you have chosen it. You must start your goal like this:
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My goal is to improve my whiting so i can have a great future. what i'm working on is where do i put my puncheralady
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I love playing cod black ops 2 it's my favorite game my best character is masson its cool sometimes if you give it to your uncle then when i beat him by lots of points and when they get very angry and when u play campaign its cool because it takes u to different stages and then i fake sleep so i can scare my uncle when he tries to prank me but i pranck him pack some times i fayck sleep walking and him and his sister were saying chris, chris, chris!!! then i walked back to my room then when we went to the pools i play with my friends and the water was so deep i brag my prank shark fin and they were scared and i was scared i pranked my self so when we got in the car we all went home and when i got home i wanted to go to sleep but i wanted to play games but a chose to go to sleep the next day i woke up in the morning and did some chores and then my mum and dad said “you did a good job you can play your game know” and i jumped on my game and played for a little while then i went to sleep.
This is the game that i'm reviewing, is called run this game is sometimes so hard to pass some misshin are so hard. I give up sometimes but i always come back to play it I like the other run, run 2 it's so cool.
On Friday our school did a ANZAC Assembly our principal said back in the days it was illegal to refuse to go to war so if you get called out you must go to war some of the people that refused to go to war you go to jail so some of the people was so happy to go because they thought it will be a trip but they don't know what will be up for them then when they got back lots of people was wounded some people was saying where's my son or where is my dad.so it was a bad moment for the people and a man named Archibald Baxter got to go to jail.